An Afternoon in July


Lu par LibriVox Volunteers

(3.5 stars; 2 reviews)

(0 hr 33 min)

Chapitres

An Afternoon in July - Read by AM 1:58 Lu par Maishwarya
An Afternoon in July - Read by AN 2:26 Lu par Anna Mayworm
An Afternoon in July - Read by BGH 2:13 Lu par Brett G. Hirsch
An Afternoon in July - Read by BLD 2:12 Lu par Blaze Dragon
An Afternoon in July - Read by EEP 3:05 Lu par Ernst Pattynama
An Afternoon in July - Read by ELC 2:47 Lu par elisecandel
An Afternoon in July - Read by FS 2:15 Lu par fshort
An Afternoon in July - Read by GB 2:24 Lu par Garth Burton
An Afternoon in July - Read by JCM 2:32 Lu par Jason Mills
An Afternoon in July - Read by JCW 2:31 Lu par Jeremy Christopher Wadkins
An Afternoon in July - Read by JM 2:21 Lu par Jannie Meisberger
An Afternoon in July - Read by LLW 2:34 Lu par Leonard Wilson (1930-2024)
An Afternoon in July - Read by MC 2:04 Lu par mlcui
An Afternoon in July - Read by PS 2:02 Lu par Phil Schempf

Critiques

An Afternoon in July


(2 stars)

At first I was put off by this poem. It's theme was unspectacular and less than uplifting, both aspects of which, if present, would have significantly altered the message of the poem and how it was conveyed. Then after having listened halfway through the set I began noting certain parallels: sultry, languid, hot are all words occurring more than once. My ears perked up. The addition of Sun, day added nothing unexpected to the poem's subject matter and the duplicate flowers, trees could merely be environmental. But cheeks pillowed/crimson cheeks and hush(descriptive/imperative) appear more intentional. And most convincing were those pairs in bold proximity still, stirred. Yet I can't relate any pattern of these to the meaning of the poem. Perhaps the contrast between the concept of breeze, air, breath/breathing and acts done in vain. Or maybe it is meant to be read repetitiously like over a book's single page in a stupor of scorching heat.